My agent asked me to flesh out the father character. His major criticism of the last draft was that the father didn't jump off the page in the same way the two younger protagonists did. He wanted me to work on getting to know the character better, and I think I've done that in this draft.
He also wanted me to re-think two characters, who he felt were a bit one-note. I took my "Worlds Most Inappropriate Teacher" character and made him a bit more intellectual, which I think really rounds him out, and I softened my villain, the Connecticut realtor, transforming him into a less threatening, more pathetic character.
We'll see if it works. Right now I'm reading through to see what works and what doesn't.
Once this project is done (I have until Labor Day), I'll get going on my Fall project, which is a new YA novel.
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